This piece is a literary train wreck. Typos, disconnected sentences, TikTok jargon that doesn't work if you write it down. Maybe you should read more if you want to write.
You can see clearly that I didn't insult you. I just pointed out what I saw in your post, keeping in mind that you expressed your desire to write. I don't need to be kind to be read, because I don't aim to please, but only to express my thoughts and experiences.
If you don’t think the comment “this piece is a literary train wreck” isn’t insulting it might be tjme for a little more inward reflection Emilio. No one can force you to be kind, but going around sharing your unfiltered thoughts because “you don’t aim to please” sums up everything that’s wrong with the internet.
The implication that she needs to read more is the insult here, just reading a lot doesn’t make you automatically a better writer. You don’t need to be kind but the world is a much better place for everyone if you are.
I'm not sure if you know what an insult is. Anyway, mine is not an implication, it's a fact. The more you read, the more you learn about writing, provided that you read mindfully and not just to pass time.
There is no need to deliver the information in a quite frankly patronising and rude manner. You should consider whether you would deliver a comment to someone’s face in the same language you used, and, if you would say this directly to someone’s face in this way, then I would urge you to consider other people’s feelings more. It costs you nothing.
So if someone talks frankly to you, automatically becomes patronizing. It's clear that you don't want to discuss with me, but you just want to discredit me saying that I am rude, because you don't like what I said.
Sorry that Emilio finds solice in condascending comments, i suppose some people struggle to understand what they read🤷
I just moved to a new continent after never having been outside of my home country so I'm very much relating to the just do it mindset, i feel alot more like a soul than a human that way🙂 My sister said that ali was badass but i only know that he avenged zendaya
Love this. “just did it” myself after reading this. What’s the worst that can happen, ey? She says…scanning for typos
This piece is a literary train wreck. Typos, disconnected sentences, TikTok jargon that doesn't work if you write it down. Maybe you should read more if you want to write.
Doesn’t seem to bother my subscribers, perhaps you should be kinder if you want anyone to actually read what you write.
You can see clearly that I didn't insult you. I just pointed out what I saw in your post, keeping in mind that you expressed your desire to write. I don't need to be kind to be read, because I don't aim to please, but only to express my thoughts and experiences.
If you don’t think the comment “this piece is a literary train wreck” isn’t insulting it might be tjme for a little more inward reflection Emilio. No one can force you to be kind, but going around sharing your unfiltered thoughts because “you don’t aim to please” sums up everything that’s wrong with the internet.
The implication that she needs to read more is the insult here, just reading a lot doesn’t make you automatically a better writer. You don’t need to be kind but the world is a much better place for everyone if you are.
I'm not sure if you know what an insult is. Anyway, mine is not an implication, it's a fact. The more you read, the more you learn about writing, provided that you read mindfully and not just to pass time.
I think calling something a 'trainwreck' is an insult personally
There is no need to deliver the information in a quite frankly patronising and rude manner. You should consider whether you would deliver a comment to someone’s face in the same language you used, and, if you would say this directly to someone’s face in this way, then I would urge you to consider other people’s feelings more. It costs you nothing.
So if someone talks frankly to you, automatically becomes patronizing. It's clear that you don't want to discuss with me, but you just want to discredit me saying that I am rude, because you don't like what I said.
Cool story bro
Sorry that Emilio finds solice in condascending comments, i suppose some people struggle to understand what they read🤷
I just moved to a new continent after never having been outside of my home country so I'm very much relating to the just do it mindset, i feel alot more like a soul than a human that way🙂 My sister said that ali was badass but i only know that he avenged zendaya